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Zoe Dawson - Visual Art Chapter  One:  The  effect  of  the  manipulation  of  materials  and  technique,   Chapter  One:  The  effect  of  the  manipulation  of  materials  and  technique,   colour,  and  composition  on  Cabanel’s  aims.     colour,  and  composition  on  Cabanel’s  aims.         Alexandre  Cabanel  was  born  in  Montpellier,  France  in  1823.  At  the  age  of  21,   Alexandre  Cabanel  was  born  in  Montpellier,  France  in  1823.  At  the  age  of  21,   Cabanel  exhibited  at  the  Paris  Salon  for  the  first  time.  From  then  on,  his  art   Cabanel  exhibited  at  the  Paris  Salon  for  the  first  time.  From  then  on,  his  art   frequented  the  Salon,  and  he  was  “elected  regularly  to  the  Salon  jury”   [2]   The  art   frequented  the  Salon,  and  he  was  “elected  regularly  to  the  Salon  jury”   [2]   The  art   produced  by  his  students  (Cabanel  was  also  a  professor  at  the  Ecole  des  Beaux-­‐Arts)   produced  by  his  students  (Cabanel  was  also  a  professor  at  the  Ecole  des  Beaux-­‐Arts)   was  also  exhibited  in  multitudes  at  the  Salon   [Ibid] .  The  Paris  Salon,  during  the  time   was  also  exhibited  in  multitudes  at  the  Salon   [Ibid] .  The  Paris  Salon,  during  the  time   that  Cabanel  was  painting,  was  a  place  reserved  for  unforgiving  judgment.  Many   that  Cabanel  was  painting,  was  a  place  reserved  for  unforgiving  judgment.  Many   Parisians  took  matters  of  artistic  taste  very  personally,  and  were  incredibly   Parisians  took  matters  of  artistic  taste  very  personally,  and  were  incredibly   intolerant.  The  visitors  would  stand  inches  from  the  paintings  and  scrutinize  each   intolerant.  The  visitors  would  stand  inches  from  the  paintings  and  scrutinize  each   brush  stroke.   [3]   Also,  the  salon,  by  1863,  had  become  about  business.    Ingres  said,   brush  stroke.   [3]   Also,  the  salon,  by  1863,  had  become  about  business.    Ingres  said,   “artists  are  driven  to  exhibit  there  by  the  attractions  of  profit,  the  desire  to  get   “artists  are  driven  to  exhibit  there  by  the  attractions  of  profit,  the  desire  to  get   themselves  noticed  at  any  price.”   [ibid] .  Thus,  there  was  huge  pressure  on  a  famous   themselves  noticed  at  any  price.”   [ibid] .  Thus,  there  was  huge  pressure  on  a  famous   Parisian  artist  such  as  Cabanel  to  produce  art  worthy  of  the  Salon,  and,  according  to   Parisian  artist  such  as  Cabanel  to  produce  art  worthy  of  the  Salon,  and,  according  to   Ingres,  to  make  money  from  his  painting.     Ingres,  to  make  money  from  his  painting.         Aim  One:  To  Achieve  Critical  Acclaim  and  Success     Aim  One:  To  Achieve  Critical  Acclaim  and  Success     The  Birth  of  Venus   [Appendix  2]   was  painted  in  1863,  the  year  in  which  Cabanel   The  Birth  of  Venus   [Appendix  2]   was  painted  in  1863,  the  year  in  which  Cabanel   was  accepted  as  a  member  of  the  Paris  Salon.  During  the  painting  of  this  piece,   was  accepted  as  a  member  of  the  Paris  Salon.  During  the  painting  of  this  piece,   Cabanel  was  striving  to  achieve  critical  praise,  hoping  to  be  noticed  by  the  critics,   Cabanel  was  striving  to  achieve  critical  praise,  hoping  to  be  noticed  by  the  critics,   and  the  salon.    The  painting  shows  Venus  reclining  upon  the  waves,  both  hands   and  the  salon.    The  painting  shows  Venus  reclining  upon  the  waves,  both  hands   above  her  head,  eyes  half  closed,  surrounded  by  cherubs.  The  painting  is  done  with   above  her  head,  eyes  half  closed,  surrounded  by  cherubs.  The  painting  is  done  with   oil  paint  on  canvas,  materials  that  were  not  uncommon  at  the  time.  However  the   oil  paint  on  canvas,  materials  that  were  not  uncommon  at  the  time.  However  the       7   7   83