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Zoe Dawson - Visual Art and  the  critics.  Botticelli  and  Cabanel  therefore  had  different  aims  when  creating   their  depictions  of  ‘The  Birth  of  Venus’.  The  two  paintings  are  consequently  very   different  in  appearance.  What  interests  me  is  the  link  between  how  the  manipulation   of  the  formal  elements  aided  the  artists  in  achieving  their  aims,  during  the  time  in   which  they  worked.  The  formal  elements  I  have  chosen  to  consider  are  colour,   composition,  pictorial  space,  light  and  tone,  materials  and  technique,  and  scale.  I   came  to  an  informed  decision  on  3  of  the  artist’s  aims,  based  upon  research  on  the   artists,  and  the  time  and  place  in  which  they  were  working.     Due  to  the  nature  of  the  Paris  Salon,  Cabanel  was  under  pressure  to  gain   approval  from  the  public  as  well  as  the  critics,  and  needed  to  improve  his  career  with   every  painting.  Simultaneously,  from  reading  critics’  opinions,  it  is  clear  that   depicting  beauty  in  his  Venus  was  important  to  Cabanel.  Therefore,  the  aims  I  have   decided  to  focus  on  are:  to  achieve  critical  acclaim  and  success,  to  capture  the  ideal   of  beauty,  and  to  further  his  career.  Botticelli  did  not  have  the  same  career  pressure,   400  years  prior.  He  did,  however,  have  the  burden  of  pleasing  his  patrons.  Also   intrigued  with  beauty,  Botticelli  focused  upon  representing  the  neoplatonic  ideal  of   beauty.  Thus,  the  aims  I  will  focus  on  are:  to  meet  the  requirements  of  the  Medici,  to   faithfully  depict  the  narrative  as  told  in  ‘The  Birth  of  Venus’  by  Angelo  Poliziano,  and   to  incorporate  the  Medici’s  religious  views  into  the  painting  of  classical  myth.         82 6