IB Prized Writing Sevenoaks School IB Prized Writing 2014 | Page 79

Zoe Dawson - Visual Art Zoe Dawson - Visual Art What was so important for me about my Extended Essay was finding and choosing one topic that I truly wanted to know everything about. From there, reading what seemed like hundreds of books and essays, making pages of notes, and writing thousands of words, wasn’t a chore because I cared about the topic I was writing about. Although some people might see the minute details of these two paintings and what they meant hundreds of years ago as fairly irrelevant, I think of it as an incredible insight into the minds of two amazing artists, and am amazed at the difference 400 years can make between two paintings of identical subject matter. Therefore, although my Extended Essay was an acquired taste to read, I can say it was written with the most important thing: real passion for the subject. Supervisor: Charley Openshaw Zoe’s essay blends a personal interest with a ruthlessly analytical art historian’s eye. She takes two artists’ depictions of the same subject and considers their merits against a structured set of criteria. The decisively contrasting approaches disguise hidden links and shared preoccupations that surprised and challenged assumptions in equal measure. Whist an analytic Visual Arts essay will necessarily lack the precision of data collection possible in other subjects, this essay argues for and successfully implements a rigorous format for assessing evidence gathered through first-hand observation and a thorough understanding of historical context. This rigour does not stifle creativity and the structure provides a launching point for independent insight into visual sources. Indeed it is hard to read without gaining a sense of the excitement and intensity with which the investigation was carried out. This enthusiasm spilled over into Zoe’s own creative practice and her final Visual Art exhibition drew on many of the themes uncovered and explored within the essay. 78