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Zoe Dawson - Visual Art Contents Introduction 81 Chapter one: The effect of the manipulation of materials and technique, colour, and composition on Cabanel’s aims 83 Chapter Two: The effect of the manipulation of scale pictorial space, and light and tone on Botticelli’s aimas 88 Conclusion 97 References 98 Appendix 100 Bibliography 103 Abstract The aim of this essay is to investigate how the formal elements of painting were manipulated in order to help achieve the intentions for the painting. The paintings in question are “The Birth of Venus” by Sandro Botticelli, and the painting of the same name by Alexandre Cabanel. I combined reading books, web pages and essays with a trip to the Musée D’Orsay in Paris to view the Cabanel painting. The subject matter of the paintings is almost identical, yet the criteria for the aims of each painting led to them being very different in appearance. The components of colour, composition, pictorial space, light and tone, materials and technique, and scale are used to answer the question of whether the artists achieved their aims, at two very different times in art history. In the investigation, I explore the aims that might have been set by the artists when choosing to paint the Birth of Venus at these two times. The limitation of the essay is that the artists’ intentions are speculative, as they have not been formally documented. However through my combination of research and viewing of the paintings, I decided upon three aims for each of the paintings. Comparing the formal elements, and the aims chosen for the two paintings led me to understand the impact of the manipulation of these elements upon how successful the paintings were. This essay concludes that Cabanel’s manipulation of the formal elements definitely helped him to achieve one of his aims, whilst evidence shows mixed answers to the success in the other two. Similarly, it shows that Botticelli’s use of the formal elements aided him in achieving his aims, yet the extent to which they helped is minimal. 79