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Zoe Dawson - Visual Art   Conclusion     The  Cabanel  and  the  Botticelli  depictions  of  the  Birth  of  Venus  are  not  only   very  different  in  appearance,  but  also  in  intention,  creation  and  reception.  Cabanel   used  his  manipulation  of  the  formal  elements  of  painting  as  a  tool  to  capture   attention  at  the  Paris  Salon.  Cautiously  choosing  the  colour,  composition  and   materials  and  technique  allowed  Cabanel  to  impress  his  audience,  intending  to   attract  both  critical  and  public  success.  While  the  critics  view  on  his  piece  were   mixed,  the  fame  and  success  of  the  painting  show  us  that  not  only  did  his  careful   manipulation  of  the  formal  elements  catch  the  attention  of  the  Paris  Salon  in  1863,   they  also  turned  the  painting  into  a  critical  piece  of  the  art  of  the  19 th  century.   Botticelli,  400  years  previously,  had  very  different  uses  for  his  manipulation  of  the   formal  elements  of  painting.  His  employment  of  the  pictorial  space,  the  scale,  and  the   light  and  tone  in  the  painting  allowed  him  to  please  his  patron,  in  multiple  different   ways.  The  narrative  given  to  him  by  the  patron  was  faithfully  depicted  in  the   painting,  with  the  pictorial  space  allowing  him  to  portray  the  characters  with  clarity.   The  imagery  of  Venus,  and  her  birth  signifying  beauty  as  a  link  between  us  and  the   Christian  divine,  allowed  a  Christian  interpretation  of  the  myth,  although  the  light   and  tone  do  not  appear  explicitly  to  blame  for  this  interpretation.  The  Medici,   presumably  for  a  country  home,  commissioned  the  painting  and  the  scale  of  the   piece  was  ideal  for  this  use.  Therefore,  we  can  assume  that  he  succeeded  in  the  aims   I  investigated,  with  the  help  of  his  manipulation  of  the  formal  elements.         References     19   97