IB Prized Writing Sevenoaks School IB Prized Writing 2014 | Page 97

Zoe Dawson - Visual Art
concept
 in
 his
 painting.
 Although
 his
 manipulation
 of
 the
 light
 and
 tone
 of
 the

painting
 adds
 to
 the
 paintings
 overall
 image
 of
 pale
 goodliness
 and
 the
 shining,

perfect
 image
 of
 birth,
 it
 does
 not
 seem
 to
 have
 added
 greatly
 to
 the
 image
 of
 Venus

as
 the
 birth
 of
 beauty.

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