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1. FOCUS: What do you think are the strengths and weaknesses of your thesis statement, argument, and overall focus in this draft? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples where appropriate.( 1-2 sentences minimum) 2. DEVELOPMENT: Is this draft well developed? In what ways could development be improved? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples of passages you want help with.( 1-2 sentence minimum) 3. RHETORICAL STRUCTURE: In what ways is the rhetorical structure of this draft strong? Weak? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples.( 1-2 sentence minimum) 4. PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT: Is paragraph development strong in this draft? What might be improved or made even better? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples.( 1- 2 sentence minimum) 5. PARAGRAPH TRANSITIONS: What have you done well in your paragraph transitions? What might be improved? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples.( 1-2 sentence minimum) 6. SENTENCE STYLE AND MECHANICS: What aspects of sentences are strong in this draft? What aspects of sentences and grammar might be improved? Please explain your answer, citing specific examples.( 1-2 minimum)
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need assistance with my discussion question. I need to evaluate the following statement in 200- 250 words: Managers should not focus on the current stock value because doing so will lead to overemphasis on short-term profits at the expense of long-term profits. In your post, explain what is meant by this statement. Describe how management might decide whether to focus on short term or long term goals and how that decision impacts the organization. Next, using the financial