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1 . FOCUS : What do you think are the strengths and weaknesses of your thesis statement , argument , and overall focus in this draft ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples where appropriate . ( 1-2 sentences minimum ) 2 . DEVELOPMENT : Is this draft well developed ? In what ways could development be improved ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples of passages you want help with . ( 1-2 sentence minimum ) 3 . RHETORICAL STRUCTURE : In what ways is the rhetorical structure of this draft strong ? Weak ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples . ( 1-2 sentence minimum ) 4 . PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT : Is paragraph development strong in this draft ? What might be improved or made even better ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples . ( 1- 2 sentence minimum ) 5 . PARAGRAPH TRANSITIONS : What have you done well in your paragraph transitions ? What might be improved ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples . ( 1-2 sentence minimum ) 6 . SENTENCE STYLE AND MECHANICS : What aspects of sentences are strong in this draft ? What aspects of sentences and grammar might be improved ? Please explain your answer , citing specific examples . ( 1-2 minimum )
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need assistance with my discussion question . I need to evaluate the following statement in 200 - 250 words : Managers should not focus on the current stock value because doing so will lead to overemphasis on short-term profits at the expense of long-term profits . In your post , explain what is meant by this statement . Describe how management might decide whether to focus on short term or long term goals and how that decision impacts the organization . Next , using the financial