Writers Tricks of the Trade Volume 6, Issue 5 | Page 32
WHO IS MY CHARACTER?
WHY DO I LOVE OR HATE HIM/HER?
J. D. Webb
WHAT MAKES A GOOD BOOK?
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J.D. WEBB
What do you remember from your favorite books? I’d bet it’s the characters.
You connected with them and felt sad when you finished reading. Then you look
for another book about those same characters. What makes up a beguiling
character?
Here’s my take on how to develop a character. I used these techniques to
write my latest book, Smudge. All main characters are female and getting in touch
with my feminine side was a challenge. You can’t describe a color as purple like
guys do. It must be orchid or lavender, or fuchsia. Fortunately my writing group
consists of me and five women. I received a graduate study in female psyche.
1. OUR HEROINES
We’ve all been through the lists of character traits and descriptions for our
characters and that’s fine. But do you really know your character? How she will
react to situations? What events in her life compel her to act a certain way? It’s
far more important to be able to get into her head and know how she will respond
when confronted by danger or conflict. Also, how she will deal with suspense.
To do that you have to create background information. This leads to a
compelling protagonist for whom we’re pulling because we have become
emotionally attached. This leads us to more believable plot twists and turns. We
have to elicit emotions. Our reader simply crawls into the heroine’s mind.
2. THE ANTAGONIST(S)
As mild mannered folk, at least usually, writers have a hard time portraying
the bad guys. How do we think like a criminal when we spend our waking
moments trying to stay out of jail? I know authors who are afraid that once they
become intimately familiar with their antagonists, their own behavior will be
affected.
I had difficulty envisioning a despicable character in one of my books. I
couldn’t seem to get connected with him. Then I hit upon the idea of getting a
picture of him. The FBI’s ten-most-wanted-list contained a picture of a Russian
mafia killer, which I printed out and pasted onto my monitor screen. When I
needed to get into the character, there he was, Ferlin Husky Lewis, looking nasty.
It worked because that character scared my wife. She may still be wondering
about me.
SEPTEMBER-OCTOBER 2016
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