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John C. Mannone Scientist Pulls Poetic Roots from Earth and Sky by Patricia Hope T he physicist Richard Feynman said, “Physics isn’t the most important thing. Love is.” Retired physicist John C. Mannone can write about love and physics, plus hundreds of other topics that often leave his readers in awe. He says the inspiration for his work “comes from the everyday wonders—from the way that raindrops ripple a pond to the way a meteor fireflies the starry night—they leave impressions that morph into poetry.” Mannone uses his background as a way to delve deeper into the subject he is writing about, whether it be stars and planets or emotion. “How I got into writing poetry is somewhat mysterious,” he says, “but I think it’s anchored in my faith conversion in 1997. I didn’t realize it then, but I was emotionally investing in people, an idea central to becoming a ‘good’ poet.” In fact, Mannone says, “I should hate poetry because a college teacher didn’t like my analysis of Spenser’s The Faerie Queene and gave me a poor final grade. I was only interested in math and science, but little did I know that my liberal arts education would prove invaluable to me as both a physicist and as a poet.” For example, after he was hired by a small college to teach physics and astronomy (to non- science majors), he was “determined to make it a memorable experience by defusing the mathematics and infusing the science with history and literature.” He explains. “I looked for profound events in history where astronomy played a key role. ‘Paul Revere’s Ride,’ a poem by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, was perhaps most influential. He wrote many poems (and letters) containing elements of the night that enticed me to study the astronomical landscapes in his poetry.” Mannone admits, “My poetry often involves themes of love, Christian spirituality, and the mundane rendered special. I write in virtually all genres with the only requirement that it be literary quality having literary depth. Though I’m a scientist, I try to avoid work that is clever, but I’m not afraid to use scientific terms as long as the words have music and their meanings are clear.” Mannone notes that even though he wrote with good 10 Southern Writers imagery when he started, his work lacked clarity and rhythm. “After I learned to write with clarity, my publication rate tripled to about 30 poems/ year. After perfecting rhythm, my publication rate doubled again to about 50 pieces per year.” For Mannone, “clarity is more than just sharpness of image and sound.” He emphasizes that “every word has to count and every word has to be the right word.” He says that rhythm is the “tempo of the poem, while literary depth,” he cautions, “is that ‘something’ that gives it universal appeal.” Mannone is proof that what he says works. He publishes about 100 pieces a year with about 700 total poems (and other creative writings) published. He believes his “conversational voice” has elevated his poetry by its focus on “impeccable rhythm and effective line breaks, as well as the inclusion of poetic devices whenever possible. This voice allows for edginess that would otherwise be difficult with lyrical poems.” Mannone says he pays attention to fundamental elements, which he sums up in a mnemonic he calls “LIMS,” for the essentials for poetry, but valid for creative writing in general: Language, Image, Music, Structure. (Image refers to all sensory details, not just visual.) He emphasizes, “I don’t believe in writer’s block; I frequently write—capturing ideas on backs of junk mail envelopes—and I publish aggressively.” Mannone’s works include Apocalypse (Alban Lake Publishing), which won third place for the 2017 Elgin Book Awards; Disabled Monsters (Linnet’s Wing Press), a book on disability poetry featured at the 2016 Southern Festival of Books (Nashville, TN); and Flux Lines (Celtic Cat Publishing) 2018. This full collection has love-related poems using scientific metaphors. He is the 2018 celebrity judge for the National Association of State Poetry Societies; 2017 winner of the prestigious award in Appalachian literature—the Jean Ritchie Fellowship; 2017 Horror Writers Association