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66 Popular Culture Review phial that reads “DANGER: OVERDOSE IS FATAL” (48), thus placing Ellis in immediate danger. Additional improvements include turning separable scenes into brief flashbacks for a more fluid narrative trajectory and creating new dialogue to enhance scenes, thereby deepening characterization. Stage directions were now more vivid and precise: “JANE comes in carrying MOUSA” in the earlier version (15) became “JANE stumbles in with MOUSA in her arms” in the final draft (6). A handwritten marginal note “Jean-Pierre a charming shit” became a full paragraph analyzing character: “JEAN-PIERRE is a complex, multi-layered character. Superficially, he is attractive and charming. However, we will soon learn that he is dishonest and unreliable. Finally, we will see him as a tragically misguided idealist” (6). In short, during the 35 months that the project involved him, Follett had created a screenplay that, in its final version—and assuming competent acting and directing—should have resulted in a coherent and reasonably entertaining adaptation of the book. Curiously, when an adaptation of Lie Down with Lions was finally produced by Reeve some five years later—in 1994—it was as a television miniseries for Lifetime, with a script by Guy Andrews and Julian Bond. Both Andrews and Bond had worked as actors and television writers. Andrews had been a comedy writer who would go on to write television episodes for Prime Suspect and Poirot. Bond, whose career had begun in the late 1950’s, had adapted Love f o r Lydia for television and was the screenwriter on the Geoff Reeve production The Far Pavilions. It was their first collaboration. Andrews and Bond made wholesale changes to the setting and storyline of Lie Down with Lions: instead of France and Afghanistan, the setting was now Luxembourg and Azerbaijan. Jane was now American, with a name change to Kate, and Jean-Pierre was now Czech and called Peter Husak. Ellis was now Jack Carver, and nominally still American, though played by the Welsh actor Timothy Dalton, who labored to deliver lines such as “Democracy . .. real seductive. ... If 1 ever had any ideals, I lost them real quick.. . . ” Because an affiliate of Reeve’s company, Reeve & Partners, was based in Luxembourg at this time, some of the changes to the original story may have been influenced by the availability of actors and locales. But the desire to avoid writing about a constantly shifting contemporary situation must also have been a factor in the decision to abandon the Afghan setting entirely. When Follett began writing the novel Lie Down with Lions in 1983, the American government was actively supporting the leaders of resistance to Soviet occupation, and Ronald Reagan called them “Heroes of Freedom” and “Champions of Freedom” in 1985. Follett, in fact, was initially attracted to the Afghan setting because of the lack of moral ambiguity: “I chose Afghanistan because there, at least, most people could identify who were the good guys and who were the bad guys,” he stated to Publishers Weekly the year of his book’s publication (Baker 55). A decade later, when the Andrews-Bond television script was being developed, such moral clarity was gone and the depiction of the