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foul they may have committed. In other words, drop the subject, get off the hook. 2 Beat around the bush Jane Austen is a master of poking fun at her characters so euphemistically that it seems almost polite, and the passive voice is one of her favorite methods for doing that. Example: “[He] pressed them so cordially to dine at Barton Park every day till they were better settled at home that, though his entreaties were carried to a point of perseverance beyond civility, they could not give offense.” —Jane Austen, Sense and Sensibility Austen could have rephrased this sentence like so: “Though Mr. Middleton carried his entreaties to a point of perseverance beyond civility, they could not give offense.” Though maybe she means something closer to: “Mr. Middleton pushed his invitations beyond the point of politeness and into pushiness, but he still meant well.” In cases like this, the passive voice allows for more polite phrasing, even if it’s also a little less clear. 3 Make your reader pay more attention to the something This is like the president getting sworn in: the thing that gets the action of the verb is more important than the people performing the action.