Motorcycle Explorer August 2014 Issue 1 | Page 97

Kevin Turner on Feature Writing • Keep your sentences short. If your sentence reads along these lines without enough punctuation or grammar to make it clear what the reader is supposed to be focussing on and contains clauses relating to different topics which might confuse; and even you aren’t really sure which is the most important part - and still it goes on and on way beyond the point that the reader can recall the start of it, consider splitting it into two or three sentences. • Read your words back out loud; if you can’t reach the end of the sentence without struggling for breath, employ a little more punctuation. • If you are struggling to incorporate something a bit dry and factual into your article, for example a checklist or an inventory, don’t be afraid to use text boxes. Refer to the text box in the body text, ie see box, titled whatever, and ensure this is clearly highlighted so the layout guy can place the box in the right position on the page. • As regards submitting your article, make sure you’ve agreed the word count with the editor beforehand and try and stick to it; don’t go below or above the word count by more than 150 words if you can help it. Make sure you have some high quality images available to illustrate your article and if you, add some captions (again, be concise). • And last but not least, practice. If you enjoy writing you’ll be doing a lot of it out of choice and like most things, you’ll improve with time and experience. MEM