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Zoe Dawson - Visual Art application  of  the  paint  on  the  canvas  was  what  distinguished  Cabanel’s  Venus  from   application   of  the  paint   on   1 t 863   he  c S anvas   hat   Cabanel’s   Venus  f m rom   the  other  paintings   in  the   alon.   w M as   y  t w rip   to   d M istinguished   usée  d’Orsay   in  May  allowed   e  to   the   paintings   the  1863   Salon.   My   trip  to   usée   d’Orsay   in  May   see   o h ther   ow  the   paint  is   in   clearly   thinned   and   glazed   u M sing   mineral   spirits   to   a p llowed   rovide  a m n   e  to   see   how   the  paint   is  clearly  thinned   nd  glazed  u w sing   m s ineral   spirits   to  p m rovide   an   image   without   brushstrokes,   like  a  p a hotograph,   hich   howed   me  what   ade  the   image   without   brushstrokes,   like   a a rtists    photograph,   which  showed   me  what   a m he   painting   so  unique.   Whilst  other   of  the  impressionist   movement   t  t ade   he  s t ame   painting   so   unique.   hilst   o o n   ther   the   impressionist   movement   t  the  same   time  used   oil   paint  t W hickly   the   a c rtists   anvas   o t f   o   create   busy  paintings   full  of   a texture,   time   used   t o echnique   il  paint  thickly   on  the   canvas   to   p c recise   reate  b m usy   p m aintings   Cabanel’s   employed   much   finer,   ark   aking,  a full   nd   o a f   n   t e exture,   ffect  that   Cabanel’s   technique   employed   T m uch   finer,  precise   mark   aking,   and   an  effect   almost  seemed   photographic.   his   attention   to  detail   is  w m hat   made   Cabanel   so   that   almost   photographic.   ttention   P t hilip   o  detail   is  what   w m as   ade   Cabanel   o   popular   seemed   with  the   critics  in  the   T 1 his   9 th  c a entury.   Hamerton   one   of  the  c s ritics   in   popular   with  the   t c alent   ritics   a in   the   19 th [   The   century.   Philip   H G amerton   as   a o ]   ne   of  the   awe  of  Cabanel’s   nd   style.   limbs   of  the   oddess  h w ad   “kind   of   critics  in   awe   of  Cabanel’s   talent   and  style.   The   limbs  of  t f he   Goddess   had   illustrates   a]  “kind  of   the  appeal   [4] .    T [ his   rhythmical,   musical   motion”   quotation   rom   Hamerton   [4]  This  quotation  from  Hamerton  illustrates  the  appeal   rhythmical,   usical   motion”   of  Cabanel’s   m soft,   graceful   mark   .   m aking,  and  summarizes  the  critical  acclaim  that  was   of   Cabanel’s   soft,  g w raceful   ark  making,  and  summarizes  the  critical  acclaim  that  was   held   to  Cabanel’s   ay  of  p m ainting.   held   to     Cabanel’s  way  of  painting.           Cabanel’s  paintings  displayed  the  qualities  in  the  lack  of  obvious  mark-­‐   making   Cabanel’s   aintings   displayed   he   C q ombined   ualities  in   he  l t ack   f  obvious   m w ark-­‐ that  the  c p ritics   were   looking  f t or.   w t ith   he  c o ommon   but   ell   making  that   the   were   looking   c for.   Combined   w aint,   ith  the   common   but  well   approved   use   of   c t ritics   he  basic   materials,   anvas   and  oil  p Cabanel’s   classical   style   approved  u h se   f   ith   the   c b ritical   asic  m s aterials,   canvas   and  oil   paint,   Cabanel’s   rewarded   im   o w upporters.   However,   the   sensual   image   c o lassical   f  Venus   s l tyle   ying   rewarded   him   with   t c ook   ritical   supporters.   However,   the  sensual   of  Venus   lying   [Ibid] ,  h naked   in  the   waves   many   away  from   him.  Thought   of  as  “ image   indecent”   is   [Ibid] his   naked  i v n   the  waves   a t nd   ook   many  away   from   him.  Thought   of  as  “indecent”   wildly   oluptuous   seductive   Venus   displeased   the  conservative   critical  e ,   ye,   and   wildly   voluptuous   seductive   Venus  d a ispleased   the  c e onservative   ritical   detracted   from  the   a b nd   eautiful   techniques   nd  materials   mployed  to  p c aint   it.   e T ye,   his   and   detracted   rom   the   eautiful   techniques   and  materials   to   p c aint   it.  This   takes  me  o f n   to  m y  n b ext   investigation:   whether   Cabanel   e s mployed   ucceeded   in   apturing   an   takes   on  to  m next   investigation:   w t hether   Cabanel   succeeded   n  capturing   ideal  o m f   e   beauty   at   y   the   time,   or  if  instead   he  sensual   painting   was  m i erely   viewed   a a n   s   ideal   of  beauty   at   to   the   time,  or  if  instead  the  sensual  painting  was  merely  viewed  as   an  erotic   appeal   desire.   an  erotic   to  desire.   Aim   Two:   a T ppeal   o  Capture   the  Ideal  of  Beauty   Aim  Two:  To  Capture  the  Ideal  of  Beauty       8   84 8