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Fenalla Keevil - Geography Fenella Keevil - Geography Writing an Extended Essay in geography is a daunting task particularly as the format is something completely new to me. Choosing a pertinent topic and title is key and is one of the hardest parts of the process. Collecting relevant data was the next hurdle, involving huge amounts of research, the Office for National Statistics website, plus I used social media, telephone interviews, letters and emails, to provide new information. Once I had my data, I found the writing actually quite enjoyable and the skills I developed, including the formatting of all the data, have been really useful. Geography coursework was easy in comparison! I felt a huge sense of accomplishment completing the essay and it really is great preparation for university. Supervisor: Alex Patton Fenella chose to analyse the impacts of a major regeneration scheme, and in keeping with her allied interest in Economics (which she also studied at HL), she chose a large retail development in Exeter which was expected to bring additional jobs, incomes and visitor benefits to the city. Analysing redevelopment impacts is a typical area for research but, while it might seem straightforward, she had to deal head-on with some difficult conceptual and epistemological issues. Most notably these were: • To what extent can improvements in a variable such as unemployment be attributed to just one scheme? • What should the impacts be compared against, ie what is the base-case scenario? • Does a spatial zero-sum game where expenditure and employment are shifted around between different areas really result in any net ‘benefits’ overall? In tackling these issues, Fenella had to learn how to use and interpret recent census data and read academic and professional literature on how to conduct such economic and geographical evaluations. That she managed to raise such a study from the mundane to the fascinating and intricate, as well as assessing impacts in a far more holistic manner than many professional studies, is hugely to her credit. 160