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REMEMBERING thing I had with me, George, who was a stuffed penguin. I looked over the edge of the canyon and saw what I had expected to see: a whole lot of nothing with the sun setting and dust blowing in every direction. There was nothing interesting about this place, nothing special. There was no sign of civilization at all in this valley of death and desolation. It was perfect. I couldn’t believe I had found safety. I began to remember what had brought me here. He did not answer. I began to run to the nearest tree, so I could climb it. Still waiting for an answer, I rushed up scrambling on the tree for a foothold. When I somehow made it to the first bend of the tree, I looked at him with eyes that demanded an answer. I had wandered around the desolate woods trying to find a way out. I looked around and up into the trees hoping nothing would come my way. The sun was setting fast, and I had to find some sort of shelter. But all I saw were tall dark trees with orange leaves the color of a sunset, never ending trees going on for hundreds of miles. My fear became more pronounced as I heard the night creatures of the forest start to rise from their slumber. I knew that if I stayed in the open, they would devour me without a second thought and lose no sleep over a possibly upset stomach. “Where should we go?” I asked the only HPAC YOUNG WRITERS REVIEW “Why won’t you answer? I asked you a question and you don’t say a single word. You know that’s rude, right?” I scolded him. As usual, he just stared at me with his big green eyes, asking forgiveness. “It’s okay. Just try to be nicer. Go to sleep, I’ll take the first watch.” I said as I tucked him into the crook of my arm. Night stretched itself out into what seemed like weeks. I didn’t think that I’d ever see the sun again. I began to despair that I would be forever stuck in a realm where darkness was abundant and light was not. I was going to rouse George to apologize, but then I saw red on the horizon. I screamed with joy and woke everything around me and also gave away my hideaway. My joy turned to ash in my mouth as I noticed the red was coming towards me with flashes of yellow and orange. I noticed dark clouds rise above the red as it raced towards me. I once again felt fear as I scrambled down my tree with him in my hand. I dropped from the tree and sprinted in the opposite direction of the fire. “I would have thought that you with huge eyes would have seen the fire before I did. But no! You insisted I take the first watch. Just stay low and be quiet. We’ll get out of this one soon.” I yelled at my companion over the trumpets of the formerly fierce animals as they, too, attempted to escape from the fire. What happened then, I’m not sure. I was running as fast as I could, but then I was in the mud, splattered with it. I panicked and started to stand up to run again, but I noticed I didn’t have him. George was missing. I looked back into the mud to see if spotted his bright green eyes. But I didn’t see them. I jumped back into the mud and started flailing around trying to find him. Him- the only one I had as a friend. Him- without the voice. “Help! Someone help me!” I heard from another direction. Thinking he had finally decided to speak to me, I ran towards the sound of the voice. I looked around and saw someone stuck in the mud. It wasn’t him, but it was someone else. Another person. “Thank you! Help me! Please!” yelled the person. “You’re not him. I have to find him,” I calmly said to the person as I sprinted back towards the fire, hoping to find George. As I looked among the smoke and orange trees, I thought I heard another voice calling for help coming from the right, but I quickly dismissed it thinking it was that man again. Smoke was filling my lungs so I decided to run against the fire towards the mud again, hoping I’d find him there. I saw an opening through the trees and went for it. As morning dawned in earnest, I stood in the valley, watching the forest at the top of the cliffs burn. And so, my search for George began. 6 TRAIN VOLUME III: 2014–2015 | 25