Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction Group 2 -1 2019 | Page 139

The Start of an Amazing Tale
Harrow International School Hong Kong, Tse, Leticia - 10
As people brushed pass the busy market in Beijing with fruits and a jug of water in their hands. It was always
a busy place, but today was especially busy. For today was when me and my family set sale to give treasures
to the poor it was tough as I knew from the days I would sit up in my comfy violet bed reading the diaries
of my great grandpa. As I knew me and my sister would be the only girls aboard…..
The new journey to atlantis
HIIIIIIII! My name is Sydney and I’m 10 years old I have a sister whose name is July she is
really dirty and clumsy and my papa’s name is Raymond and my mamma’s name is Miriam we set of
yesterday early in the morning to go and give presents to the needy .Since I arrived it has been a very hard
job keeping the place tidy I tried to clean my room it had mold sticking everywhere just thinking about it
makes me want to BARF! Any way the bed seemed to be in good shape so I just slept on it…. I woke up to
the sounds of thundering storms and roaring creatures I peeked out of a tiny hole leading outside it was a
crazy storm. I saw large tentacles smashing the sea ground. I broke into a cold sweat and rushed into every
room I could find and yell “ALERT ALERT THERE’S MONSTERS ON DECK ALERT” and of course
they would wake up and jump around screaming except for my 4 year old sister she would jump out of bed
and read her book and she would yell “YAY MONSTERS COME TO PALY YAYAYAYYY
SQUEEEE” I seriously can’t believe that girl we would have to fight bare handed because all our weapons
were stored safely in the storage room the person that had the keys had been swallowed by the monster I
used to slap his tentacles of the deck with wheelbarrows uhm you wouldn’t believe how long it took to
wash that slimy muck of my hands, but those tiring days were all over we finally arrived to are destination
Atlantis. As the beautiful land scape came into view the tall trees and the colorful flowers, but the best part
was there was a humongous palace standing proudly above us our mouth dropped as I asked papa and mama
if me and July could take a closer look as we pushed are way through the bushes and trees covering most of
the land we finally passed the bushes and trees into a clearing a tall majestic shimmery palace looking over
the forest the doors swung open, as July tugged on my arm she squeaked
“can we go in there” without answering she led herself in.AAAAAHHH a blinding flash of light brightened
the area as I called out for my sister ..no answer without looking I quickly rushed past the door .All the way
down it felt like a illusion falling down a deep dark hole THUD!!As I got up on my feet I desperately tried
to find my sister as I heard footsteps approach it got closer and closer I could make up the figure it was my
sister! “JULY” I ran across the room hugging her like I was back at home. I smiled as she told me her
adventure through candy land I thought she was lying before she showed me a crystal candy phone she told
me the time here was much slower so we had time to figure things out. She also said that she got to have a
cup of tea with the mad hatter YES, the mad hatter can you believe it. she explained that we needed to
find a pendant to go back to papa and mama she told me that it would be just around the corner of the land
of monsters I shuddered at the thought as we waked and walked as we arrived we were unpleasantly greeted
by know what I think as a nature monster moss was growing rapidly but this will surprise you it was a sign
as I heard footsteps I knew we were going to have a messy fight as my sister huddled under a rock as I
quickly made a shield out of leaves and twigs I scratched myself so I could get some blood and paint with it
on my shield I learned that it will scare the monsters in monster adventures . Apparently, it worked as I
heard it running and whining yes, I saved the day and it happened aloght of times finally we got the pendant
by playing a winning chess game against a villager.
As we rushed through pirates and monsters and fought through twice as fast as we reached the destination
we came from we could see the pedant was gleaming we quickly rubbed it and POOF we landed head first
into the pond surrounding a small village it was noisy but colorful as we almost forgot what we came for as
we quickly gave things to them including July’s crystal phone as they thanked us and gave presents of their
own including carved paintings on rocks and new weapons witch I’m shore papa will love ,as we waved
good bye we set of to find papa and mama it wasn’t that hard since they were coming to look for use since
they were wondering where we were now I’m back in my cabin writing this all in to my diary hoping that
my grandkids will read this and spread it through their own family roof BYE! poof that was a really long
diary entry I wish grandma would have wrote a shorter diary entry. As mama loaded the luggage’s onto the
ship mama said “come on Hope the ship is leaving soon and don’t say anything like that to my dear mama.”