Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 2020complete | Page 141

Future Adventures of the Greater Bay Area
Heep Yunn Primary School, Yung, Eelet - 11
Introduction: ♪A Whole New World—A New Fantastic Point of View—
“♪No one to tell us no! Or…” Sorry, too into Aladdin songs. Hey to everyone whoever is reading this! I am
here, right now in GBA. Sure, you’ll ask “What the heck is GBA? And who is this creepy person talking to
me right now and…” sorry have to cut off your question asking. Hi, I’m Eelet, who is NOT A CREEPY
PERSON . And plus why I’m writing this? I am your tour guide here, in GBA! I’ll tell you the benefits, life
and lots of my (genius) ideas and improvement plans I have! The government takes complete trust on the
smartest, most creative- (my bestie cut off all the others) Great! Now let’s take a “magic carpet” ride of
here. “♪A whole new world…….”
Benefits: What’s Best For Hong Kong, Macau, Mainland China, And ME!
“♪And I promise that you’ll never find another like ME!—” Ah, my apologies. Back here, let’s talk about
the benefits, shall we? I think that the GBA can really help Hong Kong, because some people has moved to
GBA, so Hong Kong’s housing problems are solved! Click, easy-peasy. For Macau, business could be
expanded, so could Hong Kong. Many shops could be opened, even the renting price could be lower, more
“small” business could be developed. China gets a lot of benefits too, for example, think about it, lots of
new ideas, marketing businesses, new technology designs, the impossible ideas can come to life, because of
this dream-creating new land, Greater Bay Area! (applause) Benefits for me? Quite a lot, thanks for asking,
dear readers. I go to up-graded schools, super trendy shopping malls, I get to have the finest medical
treatments…you must be thinking “Wow Eelet, after hearing this, it sounds so amazing! Can I have these
credits?” you have to come to GBA in order to have them.
Life in GBA: Welcome to My Little Kingdom!
“Presenting….. your favourite Eelet here!” Life here is totally awesome, you get so much more than you
had before. Ever thought about having everything you want in your school? Well, this is where the oneand-only
GBA all-in-one school. You get to wear whatever you like, phones are allowed, all your
favourite subjects can be studied…. For me, It can be all mix-and-match. There’re so many spots for
students here to do their specialty career. Everyone gets a chance in the community to do what they can do
to help our society. Business deals are always made so the business market here is very popular, merchants
from everywhere make deals.
New ideas: MY TURN TO SHINE!!!!
Finally, all my genius ideas are here! Let’s start with educational, shall we? For the future years, I would
make a few adjustments to the schools here in GBA. To kick off a learning programme for the students here
in GBA junior high section, I name it “the Greater Bay Activities”, short for GBA (no need to change the
short form as the place). Students will experience the best workshops in their lives that they will never
forget! The best teachers from all over the will teach the pupils whatever skills they need to master in the
future, wouldn’t that be cool? I guess you are excited for this too. For residents in GBA, a brand new plan
will be launched in as soon as possible. The plan covers benefits for medical, economic, transportation and
lots more. People will get to pay less for medical services, there’ll be discount for all when travelling on
different transports, the marketing will be taken up to a whole new level, better than other countries…. And
country exchange programmes can be arranged to attract more people. Then we can have residents from
different parts of the world joining us and begin a brand new adventure in their lives. Leaders from other
countries can meet in GBA because GBA is a place where people come together, it’s like a symbol of unite
and peace. GBA will soon be on the top of the world. Watch out, everyone!
Improvements: Duh, You Can Do Better Than That.
Improvements? Ah, yes, even though I say that GBA is like perfect, but, nothing is perfect. So, here is a few
improvements I had in mind. First, the design for the buildings here are kind of rusty, I think that bright
colours can be added to the houses, a theme, perhaps. Jungle? Rainbow? Robots? I dunno, you give a
theme. Second, the name. Cantonesia is a bit cheesy, no offense, I would suggest a better one. (thinking in
progress---) Got it! How about Ω Olympsia? The original name is Olympus, the place where the Greek
mythology gods live, the meaning is like heaven. That would be great. Third, the way to attract others to
come here can be improved. Just saying all the exaggeration doesn’t work, does the government think
they’re TV fraud commercials? Jeez, everyone knows it’s fake. Try letting student from schools (who are