Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 12 | Page 528

Mirko Land
Western Academy of Beijing, Nam, Diane - 9
H
ey there! I have a really fun story I could tell you! So let’s start the story.
Mirko land is heavily polluted. Right now, half of Mirko land already destroyed and there’s too many
people too fit in Mirko land. One day Peter and Eric sets off to space to find a new planet to live in.
On the first day they found a planet called earth. So Peter and Eric decided to go explore more about Earth.
Where they landed was in Shanghai, 100 years ago.(It doesn't make sense because I forgot to tell you at the
beginning Mirko Land is 100 year ahead earth.) The thing that caught their eyes was the people wearing clothing
called ‘Qi Pao’. ( I agree. They are BEAUTIFUL.)
Next they went to see what they ate. They saw people eat round white things called ‘Bao Zi’ and
‘Dumplings’. When they tried it they loved it! They loved the dumplings because as soon as they bit the dumpling
warm soup poured into their mouth and soon they tasted meat and vegetable taste following in after.
After finish eating, They went outside and saw houses that were covered in red and some rich houses had
dragons on them! When Eric was about to poo, he got shocked because the toilet was not a sitting toilet. He
watched some other people and realized he got to crouch. Eric was not used to it and accidentally fell in the hole
you poo in! So captain Eric went to a nearby river and washed the poo off. The poo went down the river. On the
other side of the river was a man and thought the poo was soybean , and ate it! (Oh poor man)…
The next day their boss, Red-nose told them if earth is an good place to live. And they reported back it is
an awesome place. The End! I hope you liked my story!