Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 12 | Page 14

The New Tales of Old Shanghai
Green Oasis School, Wang, Ryan
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Chapter1
THE BROTHERS TO ANLUBAS HOUSE
1947 Louis Anlubas was in a house burning woods in the far north of shanghai, his older brother was busy packing
a present for his old friend Amber zhu, Amber was a boy, when they were in the same school in Shanghai. When
they knocked Amber’s door Amber was reading a newspaper of the London fire, leo Anlubas called Amber mr zhu.
He said:”mr zhu, I’ve got a thing for you”.”And I….”said leo.”I’ve got a white rat your favorite.WOW!!said Leo.
When they were on the road, no one was there, and they met a man. He was 3 meters tall. he grabbed leo Anlubas
and ran away Louis tried to get leo back, but the man has a leg that has 1 meters tall how can Louis get the man?
So Louis just go home, a few days later, Louis get a letter from Leo it said: you need to find the peaces of the golden
cup there was 3
After it Louis put down the letter and packed a school bag, it’s full of food and a tent. He was ready.
Chapter2
THE GOLDEN PEACES
The next day, Louis was in a country far south in Shanghai, he walked along the Forest. It was darker and darker
inside the forest, at last he saw a cave, and he feels someone is following him. But he keeps going and goes in the
cave. He found a man, it was Leo! Leo Anlubas!”You was late”, said Leo sadly, “they got the pieces and ready to
crash them”. “Let’s get home before they find us!”Said Louis." But it was too late. The monsters were coming, but
Louis leap and leap, they running straight home. At home Leo said:”the pieces were in the monsters king’s
pocket.””He was like an old wooden forest, he can control electricity.”Now we can go back to the forest,””But we
will meet the wolf solder, they were like stone army”.”Let’s go!”Said Louis. But when they were in the forest ,they
meet the stone army. Leo pull out the sword and he found a golden peaces! He grabbed the stone army’s string, and
make them all into scopteres. In the middle of the forest, they found: the skeleton army, snake army, stone army,
robot army, crew army, ghost army and the pirate army, they put Louis and Leo to jall. But they found two golden
rings, they looked carefully, there was a button Leo press the button and the button was two pieces! They glanced at
it .
Chatper 3
LOUIS SAVED SHANGHAI
Louis put the golden pieces and he found the monster king is want to burned shanghai! And it was start burning
now! Louis is full of anger. He crashed the cage the monstes can’t stop Louis. He ran over the monster’s buildings.
He stomp to the monster castle and grab the solders to throw them of. Then he stomp in the castle, he was very
very cross. He crash the front gate and ready to have a big fight with the monster king. But the monster king is
above 800 floor. But Louis don’t care about it he only care about shanghai. He stomp upstars he was full of angry
energy. He stoped stomped stomped for hours. He tell leo to save shanghai before he crashed the door. Louis zoom
to 700 room, he can run two minutes in a room. Louis zoomed to the room, the monster king grabed Louis,
Louis grabed a sword and push it into kings body. But king do the same too, Louis and the king were dead and
boomed off！It was silence. Shanghai people never forget Louis, Louis was only saved SHANGHAI!