Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 12 | Page 382

The Bund Jail
S.K.H. St. Peter's Primary School, Lin, Chloe – 10
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here was a very rich person called Jessie, she was pretty. One day, she walked to the Bund and sat on a bench.
Suddenly, a stranger hit on her head with a stick and she fainted.
When Jessie woke up, she found out that she was in a house. The stupid kidnapper said “This is called the Bund
jail. I will go out for four days because I need to ask your parents for the money.”
After four days l, Jessie was very weak. She felt hungry and thirsty because she didn’t eat anything for four days.
There was a poor girl called Bela. She was very beautiful and she was Jessie friend. She was looking for Jessie’s
everywhere. Bela went to the Shanghai tram station, Shanghai big street… After two hours, Bela saw the Bund jail.
She said`` Oh! The door is open. Let me go in and see if Jessie is inside.” So she went in and had a look.
When Bela went inside, she saw Jessie. Bela said ``I’m Bela, Jessie do you remember me?”
“Oh! It is you Bela!” Jessie screamed`` Please let me out Bela! Please! Please! The kidnapper is coming back!”
Bela said “Really? I’ll get you out now, okay?”
Jessie said “Okay. Let go now.’’ At last, they escape safely.
Finally, they slowly walked back to the grand and famous hotel in Shanghai, The Grand Peace Hotel. Jessie
wanted to thank you Bela, so she gave her nine hundred million dollar to Bela, but Bela said “I don’t want it.”
Jessie felt little confused because everyone liked money very much. She asked why, then Bela replied “I have no
family, so no one play with me at home, I hope I can live with you so that I won’t be alone anymore.” Jessie said
“Yes!”
At last, the kidnapper surrendered and two girls became good friend.