The Old Shanghai King ' s Secret
Hong Kong Baptist University Affiliated School Wong Kam Fai Secondary and Primary School , Yiu , Courtney - 11
Chapter 1 : Mysterious map
It was a sunny and warm day at America . Fando and Don just woke up from bed , later were at Aphmau ’ s Cafe enjoying their breakfast , Don said ,” Hey sis , so I found this piece of paper and it ' s like a map .” Fando replied ,” really ? Let me see .” Fando takes a look at the map and said ,” where did you found this at ?” “ I found this on the floor while we ’ re walking here .” Don said . “ Well , if you found a map then why not we go when it ' s afternoon ?” Fando said . “ Sure !!! ADVENTURE !” Don said .
Chapter 2 : Adventure gone wrong
It was a sunny afternoon Don and Fando packed up their bags and gone out , “ hey sis ,” said Don , “ so which way do we go ?” Fando said , “ I think we go right ?” “ Then why don ' t we check it out if it is the right way ?” Don said very excited . “ Sure .” Fando said
When they kept walking then they got on the mountain top , Fando asked , ” is this where we are suppose to go ?” Don replied , “ hmm maybe because I saw an X on the ground .” “ An X ? a red X ?” Fando shouted . “ Yeah !” Don shouted also . Then they stand on the red X for 2 second “ BOOM ” they falls inside the mountain and they got teleported to an strange side of the world It ' s THE OLD SHANGHAI !
Chapter 3 : The Bite “ Ahhhh where are we ?! How did we come here ?!” Fando shouted . “ Oh my sis calm down ! We ' re going to just fine just remember our surviving tricks from camping .” Don said . “ Alright .” Fando said , so the two siblings was walking on the path and saw the old Shanghai ’ s train station but when they stop the to take a look the old Shanghai train station a rattlesnake that escape from his cage suddenly jumped out and bite Don ’ s leg . Don said ,” Ow ! That hurted , ugh now what I am poisoned .” Fando said ,” hmmm I think I has a pain remover medicine in my bag .” Fando searches her bag and found the medicine and gave Don to eat it , “ Yall feeling better ?” Fando asked . “ Yeah let ' s find the doctor and he will know what to do .” Don said . Then they search for a doctor in the whole street for a while , after a while they found a doctor and they ran over there . “ Doctor ! Doctor ! excuse me ! Can you please my help little bro he got bitten by a rattlesnake .” Fando said frightened . “ Sure just let me see the bite .” The doctor said . He checks the bite and found no poison was spread in the area then he said ,” Oh ! Don ' t be worried young lady the snake bite did not spread the poison while he bit him .” Fando and Don was relieved and then the doctor healed the bite and told Don to not run too much and take more rest than he will be fine , Fando and Don thanked the doctor and left .