Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 1-2 | Page 532

Secret Door
Western Academy of Beijing , Kim , Eithan – 10

Hey ! Did you know my dad has a secret door ?” I said with a loud voice . “ No way Jakob ! There is no such thing as a secret door !” “ I am so curious about that door I wonder what that door does ”. “ But my dad doesn ’ t let me !” “ Let ’ s just go and play ” It looked like my friend didn ’ t believed me . After while , I played with My Friend I went back to my house and I saw a magical door . But If I go into it , my Dad will be so mad . So I didn ’ t opened the magical door . I went outside and I had a good time with my Friends . “ Hey Jack and Ronsen ! Do you have any Interest In the Secret Door ?” “ Yeah !” Jack said . “ How about you Ronsen ?” “ Yeah ” Ronsen said . “ This night , do you want to come my house and find about the magic door ?” “ sure !” That was when the problem started .

“ Hey ! Be quiet ! I said . We saw my Dad watching a TV show . We went to the place where the Magical Door was . “ Wow ” we all said . “ Let ’ s go in !” So we went Inside the secret door . Our heads were dazzled , so we closed our eyes and we slept . “ Where are we ?” “ This is like adventure ? yeah !” Said Ronsen . I was very scared . I didn ’ t know what was going on . But there were big Houses and there was also many cars . There was a man who was just walking . So , we asked “ What is this place ?” So the old man answered “ This is San- Francisco !” “ Oh Thanks !” “ Wait ” the man said Are you from San Francisco ?” He said with a scary voice . “ Yeah ” we lied . “ Oh then can I go with you ?” “ Wait a second what should we do ?” We whispered . “ Let ’ s just try . Ok ”? “ Sure Lets go together !” But the man was smiling to his self I felt weird but we just went . “ So where are you going ?” The man said . “ I ’ m not sure ” Jack said with a low voice . “ I have very good plan on San Francisco do you want to follow my plan ?” “ Sure !” Everyone said without me . “ Wait !” but everyone just didn ’ t heard me . “ So first we are going to Golden Gate !” The man said . “ But we want go but we don ’ t have that much money !” “ It ’ s fine I can do that for you .” I was not really happy because I felt something strange .
“ So let ’ s go there tomorrow and lets go to Hotel !” “ yes !” So we went to our own room . “ So did you know that ?” I said . “ What ?” Ronsen asked with a curious voice . “ I think the man is a strange person because he laugh when we go together and he also he kept helping us and he also gave us a good Hotel !” “ What ? So he laugh when we go together ?” Jack said . “ yes !” “ I think Jakob ’ s right !” “ Let ’ s go out this Hotel !!” We opened the door . But there was a man . “ Hi ” we said . “ Where are you going ?” He asked . “ Ummm were are just going outside to play .” we said . “ should I follow you ?” He asked . “ No thanks .” we said . “ See you later ” he said . We went outside of the hotel . “ It ’ s so dark outside what should we do now Jakob ?” Ronsen asked . “ So find our Secret door and lets go back to our home ” I said . “ Do you remember the place the place that we came in San Francisco ?” “ I ’ m not sure but follow me !” Jack said . “ Do we have to go more ?” I said “ Here !” “ Yes !” We fined the door !” We all yelled . “ Wait a minute where are guys going ?” We didn ’ t said any thing . You can ’ t go into the door until I give you a permission !” The man said .
“ Oh-no !” We yelled . “ Were you kept following us ?” We asked . “ Yes !” He said . “ Can you wait for just for 2 minutes ?” We asked . “ Ok ” Man said . “ We are fast at running so we can run past him .” Ronson said with a quiet voice . “ Times up ! The man yelled . “ Three , two , one run !” We yelled . We opened the secret door and we went inside . Our heads were dazzled again . “ Where are we ?” I asked . “ Yes we are here !” Jack shouted . “ It ’ s time to sleep you too Jack and Ronsen !” Dad said . “ What ?” “ Can we talk for few minutes ?” I asked . “ Sure be quick !” “ Guys it was a fun adventure . Let ’ s never go to secret door because we know what the secret door does !” We said . “ Good night Jack and Ronsen . “ Bye !”