Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 1-2 | страница 214

New Journey to the West
Discovery Mind Primary School, Rajbhandari, Kieran - 10
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400 years ago,there was a courageous Monk named Xuan Zang. One day a beautiful Dove soared
across the sky and told Xuan Zang that there was an ancient ruby, so he hovered above the cold
ground and used his mystical powers to call his friends.
That minute his powers increased. SUDDENLY, a LARGE hologram showed him that an emperor wants
to battle for it. It was just five minutes and his friends arrived. The Monkey king screeched’’We need to
get going in order to get the ruby so quit wasting time!’’
So they started packing up. So they started strolling across china until there first obstacol Dumbledore’’You
shall not pass!’’ screamed Dumbledore ‘’What if we give you a gemstone?’’exclaimed Talking pig.
So they gave him a gemstone and carried on with the adventure.
Finally,they arrived at the himalayas, they walked for 1 hour and then!
BANG! An abominable snowman appeared’’OH NO ‘’
Friar screamed.’’I got this guys’’ Xuan Zang said. A huge fireball appeared in front of there eyes. POW!!
Xuan Zang shot the monster,but it wasn’t the last of the monster’s soul. So Xuan Zang
Summoned a big beast to face the monster. The abominable snowman knocked the giant out, and then it
fainted of how much strength it used to fight the giant.Although the monster fainted they would not give
up, so they all stabbed it, they climbed over it and RAN and RAN away. ‘’I'm to tired, i want to go back,
i'm going to die
Of tiredness’’ Talking Pig moaned. Although the pig was moaning that did not stop any of them, he
moaned and moaned, so they decided to take a break. Anyway it was turning dark and damp so they
grabbed a lamp out of the bag they had and build a shelter out of ice
[An igloo] ‘’whats for din din bro’’ the talking pig whispered.
‘’Rise’n’shine people, we got a big day ahead’’ Friar shouted,
As the sun rises they all moaned anyway they packed up and
Climbed up the mountain and wala, the next obstacle, it snowed to much,and covered up the path’’Oh my
god really?Something again
to stop us!?’’Friar screeched.
They pushed and pulled, they tugged but it wouldn’t fall down.CRASH! It fell down and they climbed
over it,and then there he was the emperor he challenged them to fight and POW! A struck of lightning
struck the emperor and he got mad’’ Hello my friends i have come to save you ALLLLL!’’Hanuman
screamed, so he struck the emperor again and again until the emperor fainted.
They walked into the manor that had it and grabbed it of the template.
‘’At last, our ruby ‘’said Xuan Zang.After a LOOOONNNGG adventure,
They finally went back to beijing.