Hong Kong Young Writers Anthologies Fiction 1-2 | Page 220

New Journeys to the West
Discovery Mind Primary School, Vargas, Ximena - 11
A
t China in the biggest mountains there was a temple where Xuan Zang,Monkey king,Talking pig,
and, The friar, were getting ready for their trip to India
They walked all the way until they got to the mountain passage. It was dark and creepy, it looked gloomy
but not scary anyways it was the only way to get there.It was cold & snowy, day by day,and this started to
look durable!!!
It already past three days and we were almost there but there was something wrong…
They heard a strange sound, the friar and the talking pig went quickly in front of Xuan Zang to protect him
then ‘Green troll’ appear,a ‘Green troll’ is a weird space of troll and there were only three left in the
world,one in Egypt’s biggest desert, one close to the stonehenge in England,and for their luck, one in the
himalayas!!!:(
The friar and the pig went to protect Xuan Zang but the naughty monkey king,went to try to fight against
him! “OMG,monkey king! Come back here!” said the pig “No worries i got it jijiji….” said monkey king
trying to hold his laugh. He started to pull lot of his hairs off, he reproduce himself! He told all the little
monkeys to attack in their monkey language “Ua uuga!” he said and all of them started to laugh at the same
time ‘Ohh...no!, i wonder what is he going to do!!!”said Xuan Zang worried.All the monkeys started to
tickle the green troll, they decided to rsn before he get read of all the monkeys!:)
In India they meet Hanuman,they both started to talk about the temple, the taj mahal, or what they could
do together, when some devils appear, they were wanting to eat Xuan Zang to get immortal but it won't be
easy.Monkey king and the friar went in front of Xuang Zang to protect him,and the talking pig went to
protect Hanuman,when a weird animal appeared…
It came out of a hole in the ground! The animal(who was pretty weird) had something that looked like a
closed fan in its back,everyone thought he was pretty outlandish,but they didn't know it could save them!!!
The animal opened its beautiful feathers and make a fabulous dance! It no only was a wonderful dance but it
also was really useful because the devils fainted in front of them all!!!
This was awesome!!! They were all so happy, they thought he has a kind of god so they called him peacock!
They all went to Hanuman’s home (which was the taj mahal)!!!
They all had a fancy dinner celebrating their discroberiment and everything that was done by this awesome
new animal called PEACOCK!!