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F INANC ING YOUR STUDY Things You Need To Consider When Writing Your Essay Know your audience There are unique criteria that must be met in every essay to help determine a winner. One way to know your essay reviewer is by following and adhering to the guidelines. Sometimes the guidelines explain the purpose of the question. If you don’t stick to the guidelines, you will give the scholarship panel a negative impression, one that says you can’t or won’t follow rules. Take note of the requirements and focus on them. Also bear in mind that your scholarship essay reviewer prefers sincere opinions and supporting reasons than to have a “say nothing” essay where the writer takes no stance on the topic. The reviewer may not agree with the opinions of students, but with specific and detailed arguments, a clearly stated point on the topic will win out over a middle-of-the-road method anytime. Be unique in your approach and don’t be afraid to take a stance. Make your essay personal and passionate Whenever possible, you should include appropriate situations or events from your own life when writing scholarship essays. As in the above tip, an essay reviewer may or may not be able to connect with what the students experienced, but he or she will not be able to dispute them. Personal stories, sincerely shared, 54 easyuni Guide 2015 Issue 6 will have a personal effect on the student. How these factors shape the student is a matter of opinion for the student, not fact, and therefore individual experiences make excellent supporting evidence for the opinions and thoughts expressed in the essay. When writing scholarship essays, always give concrete illustrations to support your claims and opinions, exemplifying your points with personal experience. For instance, if you state that one of your best qualities is management, give an example where you exercised that quality. In the same way, a question about serving humanity should not be responded to with a fuzzy “I like assisting others and feel that it is important”, but should also consist of particular instances where you have assisted others. And, please don’t exaggerate and don’t overstress the truth as this can harm your scholarship essay. Some evaluators are specialists in knowing when a student exaggerates, and insincerity will cause you to lose a scholarship you might otherwise have won. Just be sincere and honest. Avoid grammatical errors Two things are evaluated in scholarship essays and it is very important to bear them in mind. The first is the style you write in: your grammar and sentence constructions, your punctuations, etc. The second thing is the sincere expression of ideas, thoughts, views and opinions. It is crucial that you take the time to evaluate and review your essay for these things. Grammatical errors are easily neglected in the writing process because students mostly concentrate more on content than their grammar, and problems can result from this. Get someone to proofread your article Many scholarship essays are treated like any other regular class essay when it shouldn’t be. Often, students write their essays at the last minute and check it themselves or worse, forget to check for errors. They may not even show their essays to their teachers or parents. Bear in mind that the essay will earn you more than US$10,000, so treat it as something very important. Ask an expert in the field, your teacher or parents to review your essay. It helps to have fresh pair of eyes looking at what you’ve written. They can spot errors you may have missed and give helpful suggestions. This will significantly increase your chances in winning the scholarship. Ask for hints and discuss the essay with them, but don’t let them write or rewrite it. Here are few other things you need to watch for: • Stay within the number of words for the essay or competition. If the limit is 450-5