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31. I had hoped the police would blame Bruce, not ___. 32. Some interviewers ____ have a clear sense of what they want in an employee, ask very tough 33. A venture capitalist has to be willing to take risks when ___ invests ___ money. 34. Many times people will ask a writer where ____ gets ____ ideas. Part III: Revision In this section of the final, revise the sentences provided to correct the grammar errors indicated. (In many cases there will be more than one correct alternative to the sentence provided; credit will be given for all correct answers.) Revise the following word groups to remove all fragments an d/or parallelism errors. 35. I like baseball because it is fun and teaches me about the sport. 36. The White Sox are really good at the fundamentals of baseball. Which is why they won the World Series in 2005. Revise the following word groups to remove all run-on sentences.