A Level English Lang and Lit ELLA3- Cupcakes and Kalashnikovs | Page 98

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To do:

- Make sure your writing is fit for the purpose

- Use sophisticated, coherent, and cohesive language

- Adopt an appropriate style and appropriate content

- Content and style selected for audience

- Clear and controlled expression

- Effective register to address audience

To avoid:

- Stylistic lapses

- Inappropriate language or language use

- Missing out key content

- Uncertainty about style

- Broad shaping for audience

- Flaws in expression

- General approach

- Weak focus of audience and purpose

- Short and unsuitable piece